I love this video. Very creative! However, for improvement suggestions, I would say that there is a bit of a pacing issue because everything happens in a bit of a flash. This video could've most likely been helped by being a minute longer. Other than that, great!
Thanks Eddie-LMV! I will strive for longer videos with better pacing in the future!
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